Dylan, these are a good set of products that show a clear line of development. There is a sense of movement from the first image to the final one that reflect your responses to the feedback from staff and from other students. Technically, there is sound use of some of the curve tools and the use of image cropping that all serve to focus the interest of the audience onto the object. The compositional elements are sound, with the final image - the rooftop at night - showing a real eye for creating interest by the juxtaposition of strong vertical and horizontal lines with the grouping. There is sense of audience and focus on task with the brief being understood and delivered. Strong set of work with much promise for the future.
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Dylan, these are a good set of products that show a clear line of development. There is a sense of movement from the first image to the final one that reflect your responses to the feedback from staff and from other students.
ReplyDeleteTechnically, there is sound use of some of the curve tools and the use of image cropping that all serve to focus the interest of the audience onto the object.
The compositional elements are sound, with the final image - the rooftop at night - showing a real eye for creating interest by the juxtaposition of strong vertical and horizontal lines with the grouping.
There is sense of audience and focus on task with the brief being understood and delivered. Strong set of work with much promise for the future.
This is a very coherent campaign, full of flair and creativity with a very strong and clear sense of the brief and how your portfolio meets these.
ReplyDeleteGood technical skills are displayed in use of Photoshop – cutting, cropping, application of layers and effects.
Solid design ideas. Strong images and sense of framing. Sense of coherence in the work with the font and graphic choices exemplifying this. There is a sense of realism here which shows a very considered choice of location
Creative element is proficient demonstrating a conceptual element that has sense of flair and appeal to the target audience